Together And Yet Apart
Their eyes met. Her breasts pressed against his chest. His thigh pushed between hers and his lips were everywhere.
They bounced and shook.
Her husband drove his Plymouth down the dirt road. At every jolt he heard the thump of his wife’s and best friend’s dismembered bodies in the boot.
Bill West
Sep 05 2009
Damn. Don’t mess with this guy’s wife.
Frightening.
Sep 06 2009
Thanks offbeatjim.
Glad you liked it.
Sep 06 2009
Great story, Bill. I love the way you sewd introduction and denoument with cohesive threads of significances. And such a great title you came up with!
Cheers,
BBG
Sep 07 2009
Nice – liked how it didn’t go where I thought it was heading.
Sep 07 2009
Very cool. Loved how you controlled me.
Sep 08 2009
Thanks BBG and Doug for your kind words.
Bill
Sep 08 2009
Powerful stuff, Bill! Good to see you here–and the two of us back-to-back! Stop by the Factory and play the Sunday Five-to-Fifty (or fifty-five) when you get a chance. Keep up the good work, bro!
Sep 10 2009
This is a classic flash. One that will stay in the mind, short, deadly and brilliant!
Maggie
Sep 13 2009
Scary in so few words.
Sep 19 2009
Thanks Mike :¬)
Sep 19 2009
Hi Richard
Likewise! Thanks and see you in the Factory soon.
Sep 19 2009
Hi Maggie
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.