Lost
The local newspaper headed the story: Rafter Lost, Search Party Continues. They found two of the girls half-dead by the river, but one was still missing, so they started dredging the cold, deep waters. But they wouldn’t find Sheryl Reynolds. She was dead and I had a chance to start over.
Erin Cole
Dec 08 2009
Ooh, creates more questions than answers. She must have been prepared for it, did she cause the raft to capsize, she wouldn’t have known whether they would be half-dead, or fully dead. Like it a lot, nice piece.
Dec 08 2009
very well done
Dec 08 2009
Yes, nice piece of writing, Erin. Asks so many question in so few words.
All the best, David.
Dec 08 2009
wickedly good!
Dec 08 2009
Extremely clever, Erin. Michael is right, wicked indeed!!!
Dec 08 2009
So short and so full of questions. Intriguing, Erin!
Dec 09 2009
Ah… So much with so very little. Sounds like the first graf to a great noir tale.