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First Date On The Night Before Pay Day

‘The fancy dress party wasn’t exactly a flop,’ said Tina, tearing up a beer mat. ‘It was just that everyone went as a table and chairs.’

Lee smiled weakly , tried to think of a witty reply and lit another cigarette.

“Another beer”, said Tina.

“Yes, please,” said Lee, relieved.

Paul D. Brazill

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There are 8 Comments to this article

Jim Wittenberg says:
Nov 23 2009

I too would have been disturbed by such a party.

michael j. solender says:
Nov 23 2009

Wry!

Allie says:
Nov 23 2009

Oh, how true. I love how you capture these moments of life.

Alan Griffiths says:
Nov 23 2009

Very dry Mr Brazill and nicely done sir!

Anthony Venutolo says:
Nov 24 2009

you are a master at brevity, sir…

Lee Hughes says:
Nov 24 2009

Who told you about that incident??????? nice work Mr. Brazill

Paul D. Brazill says:
Nov 24 2009

Thanks gents.

Jeanette Cheezum says:
Nov 24 2009

Not yor usual, but you got the job done.